Class cancel (21 Jan 2013)

Make an Introduction (16 Jan 2012)

Assalamualaikum ,

Today our class is at computer lab in SL . Yesterday, Miss Zu give us a little info in making an introduction for term paper. Miss Zu have show us a new things that call THE HOOK.

The Hook is to catch the readers attention to read your essays or capture the reader's interest . 

more info in this web : http://www.goldstonegrants.com/grant-writing-the-hook/

She have give 8 ways to make an introduction which is :

1.definition

2.contrast to the thesis statement

3.fact & statistic

4.current events

5.rhetorical question

6.quotations

7.personal example

8.funnel/broad topic/general statement

When Miss Zu explain about the introduction Syafiqah and I was confiendent that we can make many kind of introduction . Then we have plan to choose contrast to thesis statement personal examples ,quotations and  rhetorical question . 

Miss Zu have give us many sample of question from past semester student . We hope Miss Zu will not reject our introduction . Ameen :)

3 Thesis Statement please ! (15 Jan 2013)

Assalamualaikum .

Today we came late to class , because we have QMT quiz and we have to finished it before we go to Bell class .. So we have rushing to the class  We was thought that Miss Zu will be angry but she doesn't hehehe syukur alhamdulilah .

Miss Zu have approved all the topic for term paper and have give types of writing . So ,Miss Zu want us to start do an outline form an essays and Miss Zu want 3 thesis statement in next week for her to choose which is the best thesis statement and suitable with the pattern .

 what is thesis statement ??

Thesis statement is NOT to general and NOT to specific .eg : trailer or preview .*Miss Zu said 

As you know, we have 5 types of essays

1. Cause- Effect Essays .
2. Problem-Solution Essays.
3. Comparison-Contrats Essays .
4. Argumentative Essays.
5. Discussion Essays .

.Syafiqah and I have choose Argumentative Essays . For the Argumentative Essays it has 3 patterns for us to choose . We have to choose the Pattern -> create thesis statement -> outline . We have decide to choose pattern 1 : 

Pattern 1 

Introductory paragaph:

Introduction stating the thesis statement 

Pro 1,with topic sentence 

Pro 2, with topic sentence 

Pro 3, with topic sentence 

Body paragaph:

Con(s), with topic sentence + Refutation (s)

Concluding paragaph:

Conclusion summarising the main ideas o restating the thesis statement .

Miss Zu have give many example from past semester student , so we have an ideas for do an outline and thesis statement . Miss Zu want us to understand properly because we have to make an essays in Final exam and we to know which is Discussion essays and comparison-contarts essays . If we make a mistake when creating an essays . We will get 0 marks even you make 2 pages an essays .

So we must understand the format well .

To get the correct essays when you writing in Final Exam. 

I'm bad in Debate ! (14 Jan 2013)

Assalamualaikum , Haluuuuu :)

Today class is very exciting .. because we have the debate session between goverment and opponent group .  Mine is in the goverment group which is No 1 and we got this topic :

"Is it consider cheating when your partner (girlfriend/ boyfriend/ husband/ wife) was checking on other beautiful girls/ boys/ men / women on facebook like poking, liking and etc."

My group is with Faiz Adha , Ezani , Ana , Acap , Bella and Diba . We have discuss what point that we must debate . It's come worst because we didn't get many point even we search in the internet many material in the internet have give a opposite of our point . Miss Zu have give us 15 Minutes to finish the point and get ready to debate .

Then , the Debate have start ... it was hard because we have to hear from the opponent group than relate with our point . This is some of our point 

1. Can develop loving 
2. When the partner is busy on checking on facebook , the have pay less attention to his/her partner . 
3. Divorce - to the someone that have sensitive feeling it will make the couple / marriage go into divorce
4. Broken relationship
5. etc

We didn't have many points , we just go to the debate and try to debate as usual. hahaha When we debate , we will ask " What I'm talking about actly " see the problem hah ... haihh 

Then , Miss Zu ask another 2 Groups to debate . To me there have get a easy question

"Is it true that men are easy to work with and more creative than women especially when it involves group work?"

In my opinion , I choose men will be easier in do their group work . This is because :

-Women always have an emotional feeling 

-Women also have a temper when she in the bad mood 

-Women, if there have a broken relationship with their friend ,she will never say even a single words with her broken friend. 

-Lastly, Women is very sensitive when she was being scold 

But , I don't want to be buyest so Men also have it's bad habit which is there always give a work to the women . There don't even care about the paperwork . When , give an opinion Men just take it easy because they know that women can settle their work when they involves in group work . 

When the debate end , Miss Zu have decide that Group 2 and 4 win. The best debaters is Mohd Faiz Adha and Rozita :) 

-THE END -

I can't open MY BLOG ! (9 Jan 2013)

Assalamualaikum ,

Today class is at Lab YEAHH .. 

can open a blog and start commenting others blog  unfortunately I can't open my blog . Mr Google said that I have make a new account for my new Blog . what !!! . 

I can only open my blog in my laptop . HAHA i don't why .

So i have spent a lot of time with Mr Google haihh , after half an hour I being bored and start looking my friends blog . I try to help my friend that her/his blog have a problem but Miss Zu to comment not helping . 

WHAT CAN I DO ... 

So ,I start comment but not using this blog , but just using my google account . Sorry friends :) 

I remember Miss Zu said :-

When boys blog -- it was dark and full of mystery.. erhh 

When girls blog -- it was to bright , colourful, full of pink , and some have put a song in their blog . 

See the different haih ... okay .bye2 

Fact and Opinion (8 Jan 2013)

Assalamualaikum , 

Today class is at Usahawan 214 , 

We came early today ,while waiting Miss Zu enter to the class I and Syafiqah busy think about our focused topic .Then ,Miss Zu enter ,and she brought a BOX . I excited ,i know Miss Zu will make a game from the topic that we learn today . Today we learn about FACT & OPINION . Miss Zu have ask Wasim what is Fact and he said "fact is specific " "okay it's specific but give an example "Miss Zu said . Wasim said " Fikri is handsome " HAHAHAHA ... handsome is that Fact ! 

I was imagine that Wasim think that Fikri is handsome like ------

                 

               Chris Hemsworth                  Ryan Reynolds                     Matthew Bomer

hmm okay continue...

A Fact is :-

1. objective information that can be checked or proved to be true . 
2. information that does not change 

An Opinion :-

1. is a statement that cannot be proved to be true or false 
2. is one 's personal belief , idea, or feeling about a subject.

After that , we have being divide in 6 group to play a game YEAH . My group is Nadiah Solehin , Ezani Zainal , Faiz Othman and Faiz Adha . We have to make 5 statement about our product and others will guess how many fact and opinion statement. We plan to make 3 Fact 2 opinon .Miss Zu have bring variety of product and we have to promote our product .Our product is ------>

TADAAAAAAA.....

   TRIM COCONUT MILK. 

busy discussing .. 

Nadia Zamri group .. 

Alhamdulillah ,my group and syafiqah group win , Win again :0 ..* aca' excusesme 

maybe this month i have luck when i join a game .. hehehe 

class finish at 5.50 PM .

Where the internet access ?? (7 Jan 2013)

Assalamualaikum , today class is at Dewan Seri Peria
Miss Zu ask we to bring laptop to class ... *yeahhh but a little bit heavy

As usual , Syafiqah and I still cannot finish the essays topic same with Zubaidah and Ani groups
Then , we start our lesson

1. Open the laptop
2. Find the internet access for Uitm student ...... where the internet access ???
3. BLANK ......
4. Shut down laptop.

Then i told Miss Zu why don't we go somewhere that can get internet access . Miss Zu really want us to create a new post and comment others blog . She will check in Wednesday . So, we didn't have any choice so we have to go to PTDI / Library .

The weather is hot because it on 2.30 pm . When arrived in library , we still cannot access the internet UiTM student wireless ,maybe it have a problem . Syukur alhamdulillah , Library have provided we computer so we only using the Library computer .