Class cancel (21 Jan 2013)

Make an Introduction (16 Jan 2012)

Assalamualaikum ,

Today our class is at computer lab in SL . Yesterday, Miss Zu give us a little info in making an introduction for term paper. Miss Zu have show us a new things that call THE HOOK.

The Hook is to catch the readers attention to read your essays or capture the reader's interest . 

more info in this web : http://www.goldstonegrants.com/grant-writing-the-hook/

She have give 8 ways to make an introduction which is :

1.definition

2.contrast to the thesis statement

3.fact & statistic

4.current events

5.rhetorical question

6.quotations

7.personal example

8.funnel/broad topic/general statement

When Miss Zu explain about the introduction Syafiqah and I was confiendent that we can make many kind of introduction . Then we have plan to choose contrast to thesis statement personal examples ,quotations and  rhetorical question . 

Miss Zu have give us many sample of question from past semester student . We hope Miss Zu will not reject our introduction . Ameen :)

3 Thesis Statement please ! (15 Jan 2013)

Assalamualaikum .

Today we came late to class , because we have QMT quiz and we have to finished it before we go to Bell class .. So we have rushing to the class  We was thought that Miss Zu will be angry but she doesn't hehehe syukur alhamdulilah .

Miss Zu have approved all the topic for term paper and have give types of writing . So ,Miss Zu want us to start do an outline form an essays and Miss Zu want 3 thesis statement in next week for her to choose which is the best thesis statement and suitable with the pattern .

 what is thesis statement ??

Thesis statement is NOT to general and NOT to specific .eg : trailer or preview .*Miss Zu said 

As you know, we have 5 types of essays

1. Cause- Effect Essays .
2. Problem-Solution Essays.
3. Comparison-Contrats Essays .
4. Argumentative Essays.
5. Discussion Essays .

.Syafiqah and I have choose Argumentative Essays . For the Argumentative Essays it has 3 patterns for us to choose . We have to choose the Pattern -> create thesis statement -> outline . We have decide to choose pattern 1 : 

Pattern 1 

Introductory paragaph:

Introduction stating the thesis statement 

Pro 1,with topic sentence 

Pro 2, with topic sentence 

Pro 3, with topic sentence 

Body paragaph:

Con(s), with topic sentence + Refutation (s)

Concluding paragaph:

Conclusion summarising the main ideas o restating the thesis statement .

Miss Zu have give many example from past semester student , so we have an ideas for do an outline and thesis statement . Miss Zu want us to understand properly because we have to make an essays in Final exam and we to know which is Discussion essays and comparison-contarts essays . If we make a mistake when creating an essays . We will get 0 marks even you make 2 pages an essays .

So we must understand the format well .

To get the correct essays when you writing in Final Exam. 

I'm bad in Debate ! (14 Jan 2013)

Assalamualaikum , Haluuuuu :)

Today class is very exciting .. because we have the debate session between goverment and opponent group .  Mine is in the goverment group which is No 1 and we got this topic :

"Is it consider cheating when your partner (girlfriend/ boyfriend/ husband/ wife) was checking on other beautiful girls/ boys/ men / women on facebook like poking, liking and etc."

My group is with Faiz Adha , Ezani , Ana , Acap , Bella and Diba . We have discuss what point that we must debate . It's come worst because we didn't get many point even we search in the internet many material in the internet have give a opposite of our point . Miss Zu have give us 15 Minutes to finish the point and get ready to debate .

Then , the Debate have start ... it was hard because we have to hear from the opponent group than relate with our point . This is some of our point 

1. Can develop loving 
2. When the partner is busy on checking on facebook , the have pay less attention to his/her partner . 
3. Divorce - to the someone that have sensitive feeling it will make the couple / marriage go into divorce
4. Broken relationship
5. etc

We didn't have many points , we just go to the debate and try to debate as usual. hahaha When we debate , we will ask " What I'm talking about actly " see the problem hah ... haihh 

Then , Miss Zu ask another 2 Groups to debate . To me there have get a easy question

"Is it true that men are easy to work with and more creative than women especially when it involves group work?"

In my opinion , I choose men will be easier in do their group work . This is because :

-Women always have an emotional feeling 

-Women also have a temper when she in the bad mood 

-Women, if there have a broken relationship with their friend ,she will never say even a single words with her broken friend. 

-Lastly, Women is very sensitive when she was being scold 

But , I don't want to be buyest so Men also have it's bad habit which is there always give a work to the women . There don't even care about the paperwork . When , give an opinion Men just take it easy because they know that women can settle their work when they involves in group work . 

When the debate end , Miss Zu have decide that Group 2 and 4 win. The best debaters is Mohd Faiz Adha and Rozita :) 

-THE END -

I can't open MY BLOG ! (9 Jan 2013)

Assalamualaikum ,

Today class is at Lab YEAHH .. 

can open a blog and start commenting others blog  unfortunately I can't open my blog . Mr Google said that I have make a new account for my new Blog . what !!! . 

I can only open my blog in my laptop . HAHA i don't why .

So i have spent a lot of time with Mr Google haihh , after half an hour I being bored and start looking my friends blog . I try to help my friend that her/his blog have a problem but Miss Zu to comment not helping . 

WHAT CAN I DO ... 

So ,I start comment but not using this blog , but just using my google account . Sorry friends :) 

I remember Miss Zu said :-

When boys blog -- it was dark and full of mystery.. erhh 

When girls blog -- it was to bright , colourful, full of pink , and some have put a song in their blog . 

See the different haih ... okay .bye2 

Fact and Opinion (8 Jan 2013)

Assalamualaikum , 

Today class is at Usahawan 214 , 

We came early today ,while waiting Miss Zu enter to the class I and Syafiqah busy think about our focused topic .Then ,Miss Zu enter ,and she brought a BOX . I excited ,i know Miss Zu will make a game from the topic that we learn today . Today we learn about FACT & OPINION . Miss Zu have ask Wasim what is Fact and he said "fact is specific " "okay it's specific but give an example "Miss Zu said . Wasim said " Fikri is handsome " HAHAHAHA ... handsome is that Fact ! 

I was imagine that Wasim think that Fikri is handsome like ------

                 

               Chris Hemsworth                  Ryan Reynolds                     Matthew Bomer

hmm okay continue...

A Fact is :-

1. objective information that can be checked or proved to be true . 
2. information that does not change 

An Opinion :-

1. is a statement that cannot be proved to be true or false 
2. is one 's personal belief , idea, or feeling about a subject.

After that , we have being divide in 6 group to play a game YEAH . My group is Nadiah Solehin , Ezani Zainal , Faiz Othman and Faiz Adha . We have to make 5 statement about our product and others will guess how many fact and opinion statement. We plan to make 3 Fact 2 opinon .Miss Zu have bring variety of product and we have to promote our product .Our product is ------>

TADAAAAAAA.....

   TRIM COCONUT MILK. 

busy discussing .. 

Nadia Zamri group .. 

Alhamdulillah ,my group and syafiqah group win , Win again :0 ..* aca' excusesme 

maybe this month i have luck when i join a game .. hehehe 

class finish at 5.50 PM .

Where the internet access ?? (7 Jan 2013)

Assalamualaikum , today class is at Dewan Seri Peria
Miss Zu ask we to bring laptop to class ... *yeahhh but a little bit heavy

As usual , Syafiqah and I still cannot finish the essays topic same with Zubaidah and Ani groups
Then , we start our lesson

1. Open the laptop
2. Find the internet access for Uitm student ...... where the internet access ???
3. BLANK ......
4. Shut down laptop.

Then i told Miss Zu why don't we go somewhere that can get internet access . Miss Zu really want us to create a new post and comment others blog . She will check in Wednesday . So, we didn't have any choice so we have to go to PTDI / Library .

The weather is hot because it on 2.30 pm . When arrived in library , we still cannot access the internet UiTM student wireless ,maybe it have a problem . Syukur alhamdulillah , Library have provided we computer so we only using the Library computer .

How we create a Topic ?

 Assalamualaikum, 

Today Miss Zu ask we to create a new post about our Mid term essays topic. Actually, i have post all my reject topic in my post from the beginning i present my topic . yahh never mind .. I tell you all again . 

In 18 Dec 2012 ,we have present 5 essays topic but it's have being rejected . 

This is my topic that have been rejected ..

• Flodded by garbage.
• The Culture victimisation at shopping Mall.
• Theraphy for cancer patient .
• Internet using among UiTM student 
• Prank .

We have find all this topic in Newspaper and Syafiqah found in the internet . I find Newspaper at TV room at Sector C - Si Manja Kini , i take it all and find the newest topic but badly I did no How to create the focussed topic. We also go to the library , to find the material at Databases . 

In 19 Dec 2012 , we have choose "similarities and differences import car and local car " that is comparison and contrast essays . It so hard for us went we know this topic didn't have similarities to compare local car and import car . We have find it on Databases and in the internet it still doesn't have . I also ask my dad cause work at Proton since he 23 year until now and I am sure that he was expert in cars . Unfortunately, he said it doesn't have similarities , ayah said " only stering is a same " 

In 31 Dec 2012 , we have decide to choose this topic " bribery in business among Malaysian " This topic I have ask my friend from UiTM Lendu Melaka .We have a lot of material in bribery but we have choose the same topic with Solihin and Faiz group . So ,we have to change topic again . 

In 1 Jan 2013 ,  we have confiendently choose this topic " The causes and effect : student malaysian want to study abroad " We have a lot of material unfortunately this topic also being rejected . This time Syafiqah and I was totaly fed up . We give up !! I was cryingggg , I call my mom and my friend ,what topic that I have do ?? 

In 2 Jan 2013 , I have give a list to Miss Zu check , at first I have list about 12 topic,I have ask my friend from UiTM Lendu , Arau Pahang , Chendering Terengganu and Pulau Pinang . I also ask my aunty , my parents and my sister .After I have discuss with Syafiqah . We try to make it specific because we want the topic /issue that have a lot of material . So it goes to 5 topic only :

1.  THE CAUSE AND EFFECT : CHILDREN BEING ABUSE AMONG MALAYSIAN .

2.  HOW TO PREVENT: IS STRESS IS LEADING CAUSES OF SUICIDE ?

3.  THE CAUSE AND EFFECT : MALAYSIAN STUDENT ALLOWED TO BRING HANDPHONE TO SCHOOL.

4.  SEX EDUCATION IN MALAYSIA .

5.  THE CAUSE AND HOW TO PREVENT LANDSLIDE .

.Alhamdulilah , our topic "  SEX EDUCATION IN MALAYSIA " is being approved but we have make a suitable focused topic . It also have a lot material in Databases , Newspaper , Internet and many others. 

In 9 Jan 2013, Miss Zu have help us to make suitable focused topic. At last it being approved . Syukur Ya Allah :) 

BROAD TOPICS:

SEX EDUCATION 

NARROWED TOPICS:

SEX EDUCATION IN MALAYSIA 

FOCUSED TOPICS:

FUTURE SEXUAL EDUCATION IN MALAYSIA:

SHOULD IT BE IMPLEMENTED OR REJECTED?

This is Argumentative essays it's hard but we try our best to excellent essays .Insha allah 

Then , Miss Zu also ask we to keep information of material in a table , so it's easy for us to find our resource when creating an essays . 

So here it is :- 

TYPE OF MATERIAL	Newspaper (The Star online)
TITLE OF ARTICLES	Malaysia says no to sex education .
AUTHORS	None
PUBLISHER	asian one education
YEAR OF PUBLICATION	2010
ISBN	None
WEBSITE ADDRESS                              (ONLINE SOURCES)	http://www.asianoneeducation.com
DATE OF RETRIEVAL                        (ONLINE SOURCES)	4/1/2013
VOLUME OF NUMBER, ISSUE, NUMBER & PAGES	1 Pages

TYPE OF MATERIAL	News (Free Malaysia Today)
TITLE OF ARTICLES	Sex education : Piecemeal attempt won't help
AUTHORS	Jeswan Kaur
PUBLISHER	Free Malaysia Today
YEAR OF PUBLICATION	2012
ISBN	None
WEBSITE ADDRESS                              (ONLINE SOURCES)	Free Malaysia Today.htm
DATE OF RETRIEVAL                        (ONLINE SOURCES)	4/1/2013
VOLUME OF NUMBER, ISSUE, NUMBER & PAGES	1 Pages

TYPE OF MATERIAL	Newspaper (The News Straits Times)
TITLE OF ARTICLES	Sex Education : Teenagers need safe outlet to explore subject.
AUTHORS	None
PUBLISHER	The News Straits Times
YEAR OF PUBLICATION	2012
ISBN	None
WEBSITE ADDRESS                              (ONLINE SOURCES)	The News Straits Times. com.my
DATE OF RETRIEVAL                        (ONLINE SOURCES)	4/1/2013
VOLUME OF NUMBER, ISSUE, NUMBER & PAGES	1 Pages

We Win .. (2 Jan 2013)

Assalamualaikum wbt & hello friends

Yesterday is a hard day for us because my topic still being rejected
but not for today ..syukur alhamdulillah Fikri and Faiz Adha have give us some topic to present for today . I have make a list of topic to Miss Zu check which is suitable. Miss Zu have choose my fourth topic which is   " SEX EDUCATION IN MALAYSIAN  "

Today class is interesting hahaha
Miss Zu have create us to group and divide us to 4 group and we have to watch the video and make a topic sentence/ conclusion that we get from the video .

Syukur , we won :D *wink3 firework
hehehe interesting game , i think with this game we can understand more ... because student is visual learner including me . So student need a game that relate with the subject .

It still being rejected !! (1 Jan 2013)

Assalamualaikum ,
Today class is at Usahawan 214
Miss Zu have ask we to present about our new topic , we have choose " The causes and effect : student malaysian want to study abroad " We have a lot of material unfortunately this topic also being rejected . We really sad and we almost give up , I get jealous when my classmate have a topic but we didnt . In my mind , always think about a topic Ya Allah please help us .. when we study Bell in the class syafiqah and I lose of focus because think about a great topic to Miss Zu . I didnt sleep because have to find a topic for our essays . I have ask my friend , my parents and others . When i call my mom and always ask her to pray for us that our topic is not being rejected again .Only Allah knows our feelings :'(

Today we learn summarizing...

 Summarizing 

is the reproduction of a passage using fewer words . You can see more in BELL311 text book page 28-30 

Rephrase the sentence (31 Dec 2012)

Assalamualaikum ,
The Holiday was END .. it so sad but we as a student have to face it
Today our class is at Dewan seri peria . yeahh it so near with my room hehehe
Syafiqah and I want to show Miss Zu our new topic .All the material we have print and the topic is perfect unfortunately Faiz and Solihin group have choose the same topic with us .The topic is " bribery in business among Malaysian "

ARHHH !! but now just redha what happen to us . Miss Zu also in a good mood. As long Miss Zu didn't get angry with us , we didnt stress to find a new topic over and over again . Miss Zu also ask we to be patient to find a great topic , she give us a motivate . Alhamdulilah my classmates also give a support a give a lot of idea .

Rephrase the sentence 
Means expressing someone else's ideas using your own words .
Miss Zu have teach us and I think is hard but it actly easy if we understand . You can see at page 25-27 in text book bell 311.

Miss Zu give us a homework page 26- 27 . The class end 

She getting angry (19 Dec 2012)

Assalamualaikum ,

As usual in wednesday our class is at the lab . 

Today we all are feel nervous and stress with the essays topic . 

In that day , Miss Zu is very pissed off with our class because many my classmates get wrong in making the focused topic .She totally not in a good mood , but alhamdulilah when we present Syafiqah and I didn't being scold like yesterday. Our topic being approve but we didnt have many material about our essays. Types of writing that we choose is comparison -contrast essays . The topic is " Similarities and Differences :Import car and local car " . So , we try to find a new topic at home because tommorow is Public Holiday . *merry christmas for the non muslim