Repairing an Introduction (30 Jan 2013)

Assalamualaikum,
Today class is at lab,
We still continue with the thesis statement for Ita and Asnawi group's
When they present Miss Zu ask us "What mistake that you all can see on their thesis statement ?" We did not know the answer. Miss Zu was angry and pissed off again .Ooo....

In the end ,the thesis statement done.

Then, Miss Zu ask us to make an introduction and Miss Zu will check one by one .
Syafiqah and I have done the introduction .
When Miss Zu come to check our introduction, Miss Zu have trace many mistake on our sentence structure and of course the grammar.We accept our mistake. Alhamdulillah our introduction done well .